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Friday, September 24, 2010

I still have the note you wrote...

Leafing through the pages of my past…
                Got encountered with the note you wrote…
Wondered why it came in to my present
                Where I want it to be totally absent…

But as they say past is the part of life
                And life goes on & so the past sometimes…
Reliving the memories of those sweet something
                That is making me nostalgic in this life of nothing…

I still have the note you wrote
                In which you portrayed me as a funny tot…
The words you wrote with those curly nodes
Are the words which make me full of reloads…

The time which we used to spend in the meadows
                Is the time which came back in my shadows…
The time is not going to come back these days
                And I don’t want it too nowadays…

I still have the note you wrote
                Which reminds me of the time we stood…
But now the things have changed a lot
                And so the time & train of thought…

I still have the note you wrote…
I still have the note you wrote…

5 comments:

  1. achha he.....pehli post he jo maine puri padhi he....keep going..meri taraf se 1 hi coment he...send me the zerox of the note which you still have....

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  2. wowwwww........this is wonderful neel..... i just simply loved it....... please keep on with this fantastic work......

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  3. Thanks Krupanshu,me to dhanya ho gaya ye sunnke ki tune ye pura padha aur achaa laga.

    Heyy thanks Roshni..thank u so much..will surely continue with this work..i m glad u liked it!!

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  4. U r A great Writer bro....
    Autograph plzzzzz

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  5. Thanks Darshil..thanks for that overwhelming response!! I am still an amateur in this thing..

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